Dizzy, tired to continue follow me. Three years I’m to hide this sick. Today I’m very tired , but I’m reckleness go to scholl. To try konsentration to lesson. My best friend, he ask”what happen with you? You to look pale, are you sick?”. “I’m okay, only tired”.
At The time, I’m not go home, but to follow ekstrakurikuler to gather with friend I fell sick in my cest. “oh my good, what every day I’m must to feel this sick? If you permited I want to repent and to gather with my friend, my family, everybody”. I wasn’t want my friend and my best friend know about me.
I see him waiting me in front of spread out. After than I was go home with him. the middle away my body to tremble and my head was sick, so that the blood out from my nose. Not strong again I was to fall faint. Not connescious, I was brought in the hospital with him.
Before to inform my parent, his ask by one oyher a doctor. And say “that me to suffer brain cancer heart, if my heart the more weak, I was never to hang on more long and be must to operation”.
Handphone my parent to chirp, listened inform from his, my parent to on take place goes to hospital. Arrive in there my mom to embrace me and fell pity with my condition, like this. Complete equipment to help me.
One week to past, I wan’t conescioes. I’m a coma, everyday my friend to guard me. His take me food and he said “I’m made that for you”
And than my parent know about my sick and to submit. I was to operation and the operation to walk, but God to indent other, God is very loved me, I was recovered for my sick, and now God to embraced me, to pick up me, gone “Back to my come from”.
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nomer absen : 19
bagus,
tetapi ada penulisan kata yang salah
scholl seharusnya
school
nama : isha putpitasari
no.absen : 16
liat lagi ada tanda baca yg salah ..
tapi ceritanya cukup menarik
ceritanya bagus bgt... bkin terharu hixz hixz.. tingkatkan
saran:
and than di ganti and then
hati2 dg pmakaian "to be" yg tumpuk ama kata kerja, kyak "I'm ti hide", I'm made... it gk boleh
trs yg "To try konsentration to lesson" di ganti "trying to concentrate to the lesson"
ap lg ya? nyusul yah... :P
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